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Hi guys!

I practiced a lot since the last time I posted a render, for that reason I wanted to show the final result

I know it's not perfect, but I think it is much better than previous renders

Sorry for my english

Greetings to all!




if you can not see the picture try this link

http://i.minus.com/ibitzNRAWXVrz6.jpg

hmmm... i don't see any image

render is great! not so sure about depth of field... i can't really focus on something

very good render!
I like sofà texture and warm colour

RodriKray92 wrote:Hi guys!

I practiced a lot since the last time I posted a render, for that reason I wanted to show the final result

I know it's not perfect, but I think it is much better than previous renders

Sorry for my english

Greetings to all!




if you can not see the picture try this link

http://i.minus.com/ibitzNRAWXVrz6.jpg

Good work!

Here are my suggestions:
- too much sharpen (see bad edge on table)
- too much chromatic abberation
- model of blanket on chair should be more detailed.. use zbrush or marvelous designer if you can...
- sofa material is quite good but i think texture is too big. scale it down a bit. Also try to add a bit more detail (wringkles...)
- the green plant lacks realism
- wall, ceiling, Maradona - good!
- carpet needs more work.. use better texture or use instances to get furry look
- the things on table could use some dirt textures, table looks very old/used while things on table are all new and shiney...
- put couple of things on wall shelf (see this for ideas: http://zancanaro.com/gspot/?page_id=91)

I hope you don't feel like i'm criticizing too much. It's really good work already, but I think you can bring it up a notch.

jure wrote:

RodriKray92 wrote:Hi guys!

I practiced a lot since the last time I posted a render, for that reason I wanted to show the final result

I know it's not perfect, but I think it is much better than previous renders

Sorry for my english

Greetings to all!




if you can not see the picture try this link

http://i.minus.com/ibitzNRAWXVrz6.jpg

Good work!

Here are my suggestions:
- too much sharpen (see bad edge on table)
- too much chromatic abberation
- model of blanket on chair should be more detailed.. use zbrush or marvelous designer if you can...
- sofa material is quite good but i think texture is too big. scale it down a bit. Also try to add a bit more detail (wringkles...)
- the green plant lacks realism
- wall, ceiling, Maradona - good!
- carpet needs more work.. use better texture or use instances to get furry look
- the things on table could use some dirt textures, table looks very old/used while things on table are all new and shiney...
- put couple of things on wall shelf (see this for ideas: http://zancanaro.com/gspot/?page_id=91)

I hope you don't feel like i'm criticizing too much. It's really good work already, but I think you can bring it up a notch.

Thank you Jure!

Your suggestions helped me a lot to improve, I will put into practice your advice to go a step further

Nice render!!